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Good Morning __, Hi, (my name) here, specialty recruiter for (x industry). I wanted to catch up with you regarding a skilled sales engineer with a proven track record of sales performance that I recently recruited. He has over 20 years of manufacturing experience which includes (x, y, and z industries). In his career he's brought in over $60 million in sales. In just one success story he secured $21 million in sales in 3 years for a leading (industry) company. In another success story he brought in $4 million in transfer sales by offering better services to customers over 5 years. Call me if you'd like to talk with this candidate or if you're looking to fill any other (industry) positions. Listen Here Danny's Critique: I’m a big believer in leading with good news when giving a critique (so if I was giving feedback to the RNC on their recent convention, I’d have to go with, “Well, it was dark, but not as dark as…uh…Black Holes in the outer reaches of the cosmos.”), so let’s start with this… You get an A Plus with the “A” standing for “affable.” Don’t trivialize this! (I’m sure you’ve been told over and over you come across as a nice guy, [...]